WANTED and Tawni blowing Pikachus away

WANTED WANTED WANTED WANTED WANTED WANTED
JUST DO IT!!!111111
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE BITTE BITTE BITTE
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT IS NICE TOO BUT COMIC FIRST

Also, I think your anatomy could use a little more... muscle structure, I guess? Like, like, hold on.
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The last big panel in the one, the arms seem kinda... half bendy, half normal. And it just doesn't appeal to me. Like a little more understanding could be applied. Make it a little less messy, because I feel that would make it a lot more professional-looking too. (Also I would say backgrounds, but the fact that I've never liked backgrounds with no lines slants my opinion.)

I think I'd like character development. ... No I don't have anything to elaborate on.

i love how tawns destroys pikachus lol and i love your comic wanted cause it cool, but you always come up with the cooliest characters! but you should play with the flash more make a mini movie. so i donno it's hard for me to choose :3

maybe you might wanna tweak your backgrounds and anatomy otherwise i think your fine.

im even trying to get anatomy better on my charaters lol

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ALSO, IF YOU'D WANT TO TRY ANIMATING SOMETHING
AWESOME
I WOULD SO WANT TO SEE IT
WORK FLASH OVER LIKE A HOE

Heh. Well, I'll be sure to work on WANTED as soon as I can. I didn't realize so many people liked my Tawni VS Pikas artwork... I get ideas for that all the time, but I don't post a lot of it because I didn't know anyone else enjoyed it aside from Nyoko and I. x)

Ahh alright. I'll work on WANTED some more. I kinda have to be in the mood to do a comic page though... otherwise it feels really forced.

Muscle structure, huh? Yeah... that's kinda my weak point. My art until now was mainly based on... what's it called? Derivative anatomy? Only recently have I started working based on photographs and anatomy books.(big failure on my part) I'm making an effort to actually understand muscles and bones and stuff by going through a giant anatomy book from cover to cover, but I'm still at a basic enough point that the results are not yet apparent.

I'll work on the messiness too... I like the sketchy lineart style I've been doing because it's easier and can sometimes look really good, but it encourages me to be sloppy. x.x I definitely have noticed in my recent art that I've started tending toward sloppiness.

Thanks for your comment--you helped me confirm my own suspicions about some of the main flaws in my art.

Ah, animating! I do love animating, and I have a few WIP projects that I was working on but gave up on/got bored of/whatever. I was thinking of resurrecting one that I was really interested in... but I have to plan it out better and more realistically then I did the first time around.

There's this one big animated Flash 'movie' I really want to make that I think would actually be within my capabilities... but sadly, I lack voice actors. :/